Rachel wrote this non-fiction article about water. Please comment:
Water is so loveabull it is so helpfull too. We need water for: drinking, taking a bath, to live. and it can make: mud, snow, sleet, hail, rain. All of those things are fun to play in.
If there was no such thing of water,..we would die. We do not only need trees...but a tree needs water. All kinds of plants need water.
and water is nothing, so it an go with everything. If we need to get it cold, we could get some ice. Water can evaporate (go up into the air)and go in a cloud and then it rains. And that is called the water cycel. First, evaporation. Second, condensation. Last precipatation. And water brings rain drops with all sizes. It can be an ovel, a heart, circle, and teardrop.
4 comments:
Rachie,
This is Scarlet. I am at home because I had surgery. I liked this story. You are a good speller. I wish you could come over and play. Maybe we can hang out this summer.
Scarlet
Thanks for teaching me about water, Rachie! I think that it's cool to learn how many things water can make: mud, snow, rain.
You're a talented writer!
Love you,
Aunt Colie
This is a great article! Are you having fun with Grammy and Pop?
These are things she likes to do in her free time. She's crazy, but really cute.
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